Thursday, June 14, 2007

Ravenhair (Why Did You Smile?)

Ravenhair
Did I put you off your guard
When I went and closed my eyes?
Your sweet head dropped
And your early-train thoughts
Flew away, out the window
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3 comments:

  1. LudicrousityJune 20, 2007 at 12:08:00 AM GMT+10

    That's lovely. Did you write that?

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  2. Troy WheatleyJune 21, 2007 at 6:40:00 PM GMT+10

    Yup. I think I threw away what I originally wrote though, so I had to remember it as best I could and then fill in the blanks.

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  3. LudicrousityJuly 16, 2007 at 6:11:00 PM GMT+10

    It's lovely!

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